The graph compares how many students chose their subjects for university in the year of 2005.
Overall, female had the highest share in three subjects while men ranked first in four. The highest figure for female and male were reported in Social Sciences and Sciences respectively.
There was a significant differences between the amount of male and female in Science, former standing first with 21 thousand and latter have half students than that. The disparity between the two figures were almost same in Mathematics and Languages. However, while in the former male had the higher share of students with 18 thousands, female accounted for the larger proportion in the latter with same numbers. Women ranked first in Social Sciences, whereas the share of men was lower by a remarkable margin ( 24 and 14 thousands).
In contrast, there were threefold disparity among male and female in subjects like Art, Music, Drama. The Literature and Law have 5 thousands difference between men and women, while former subject was responsible for 15 thousands and latter was 10 thousands students, and men were the highest share among both of them.
- Some organization believe that their employees should dress smartly Others value quality of work above appearance Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or 56
- the bar chart below shows the types of music bought in USA in 2010 by age group 64
- Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel For this reason attention should be given to colour scheme when decorating places such as offices and hospitals How true is this statement How far does colour influence people 61
- Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel For this reason attention should be given to colour scheme when decorating places such as offices and hospitals How true is this statement How far does colour influence people 61
- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional and religious festivals during festival periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'difference'?
Suggestion: difference
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of men was lower by a remarkable margin 24 and 14 thousands. In contrast, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14516129032 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55665936539 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0497845595 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721767304047 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385370124805 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532903306671 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699917134828 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670368245219 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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