In modern days , government create chances to young generation. However, tin the past, students did not have capacity to study abroad, thus they had to graduate in their inherent country. So, I will discuss about the advantages of studying abroad in the following essay.
Firstly, by that time people were commissioned the university but juncture did not enough like now. They did not have capacity for paying money to university. Their parents comprehended that to study other country was a bit difficult because they did not know further information their country study system and rules.
Secondly, I totally agree with latter statement. As we know, all of the world have olympiad such kind of subjects. If the students with the olympiad then they will get an opportunity to study elsewhere. Moreover, IELTS is developing day by day and have other certificate such kind of one. If you get a TOEFL, CEFR, IELTS and other kind of certificate , you can study in a foreign country and work there. If you want, you will win grant for studying authoritative university elsewhere and probably you desiderate to live abroad forever. The other side of the coin, studying other country have a few difficulties such kind of accommodation, living, getting friends. It is hard to be in another country for the first time. For instance, If you lose way then you will have to spend money to reach a right destination. There is another side, you do not know a foreign language,as a result you come into a bit complication for purchasing.
To sum up, all things considered, studying in a foreign country will open a new road for our future aim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90287769784 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76777880073 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2041496725 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1764705882 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295517593919 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943544742666 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731329275845 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18400286799 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717394677839 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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