in the past,when students did a university degree,they tented to study in their own country.
nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
the days are gone when students prefer to graduate from home country but now majority of students see greater chances in overseas study.both has their own pros and cons.i believe this development has more advantages compared to disadvantages.
the education plays a significant role in building career as well as it increases chances of employment.In earlier times,because of financial crisis people prefer to study in their home country but as people getting wealthy,they have selected abroad for further studies.this development can be called as an educational development which has many advantages.firstly,by studying at abroad student will understand the value of money.to describe,foreign education costs too much so it is essential to do part-time job while studying.secondly,overseas study is like cherry on the cake for resume.thirdly,students can enhance their communication skills by living in different culture as well as by making overseas friend.lastly,the most important reason is the wage in developed countries are higher.hence,students prefer to study there.in fact,Indian students migrating to Canada for these reasons.
On the other side,this type of development has some drawbacks,too which can not be overlooked.due Excessive foreign study,there will be less skilled worker in native country.similarly.youth power decreases.to exemplify,after completion of study mostly students prefer to become resident of that nation in which they studied.it badly impacts to the home country.to describe,in USA there are 20% of doctors are indians whereas indian hospitals are craving for doctors.
To sum up,without a qualms,overseas study is very beneficial for flourish their ability and it immense benefits.however,excessive amount of migration for study imposes harmful effect on native country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99230769231 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1857111122 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 274.6819752 49.4020404114 556% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.5 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 7.06120827912 552% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251974812242 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147032197532 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354705542449 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147032197532 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354705542449 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.3 13.0946893788 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.88 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.35 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.2 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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