People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
With the Advent of 21st century, technology has been progressed quickly. Number of technical gadgets can be seen, which are helpful for collecting data and making predictions. On the bases of this, it is stated that world has much similarities. All around the world, residents can be considered equal owing to some factors in terms of humanity works and religious teachings. Whereas some differences also get to see such as interest of eating, wearing and dancing is totally different in every sector. In my point of view, world is mostly altered, changes can be seen on just some distance. Both sides will be explained in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
To commence with, a group of people argue that demos are mostly same in whole world because of having humanity inside as well as religious teachings. It is undeniable that many countries are running charity works and everyone has equal mercy in heart for poor people. Furthermore, each and every person follows a religion and every God teaches love, care and respect which is obeyed by inhabitants. Therefore, equality of religion make people more similar.
Apart from this, opponents of this statement claim and I also believe that inhabitants of whole world should be considered separate owing to some factors. First of all, cultural diversity. It is considerable that cultures are different in every region. Due to this, variation get to see in language, food, dance and music. Every society follow their own culture, which is totally varied to others. This variation can be seen in just little distance. Because of having diverse customs, way of behaving, eating as well as type of communication are not similar to each others. Therefore, it is considered that people are much various instead of being equite.
In conclusion, although demos are same to some extent because they follow same life methods of religions. But, dwellers are mostly different because they have diverse ways of living life due to having cultural change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11246200608 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64407293086 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6913692522 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126086562202 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374398332593 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435515209083 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797283251833 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017480079966 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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