All humans have a target to manage their professional life and personal life, but most of them are unable. Some reasons behind that are work overload, time management, the solution could be segregation of work and schedule daily routine.
To embark upon, work overload is the main reason which does not allow a person to enjoy his life. Moreover, time management of daily routine and not skillful in work also leads to the same problem. Apart from this, working in different shifts ruin employee's personal life. Furthermore, traveling distance for going to the workplace also causes an imbalance.
Firstly, we have to divide our work to avoid the burden. Although, after a job, anyone could be lazy, but going according to the fixed schedule would help in managing time. Secondly, finding a stable job near your accomdation will reduce travelling time and a person could able to make ideal time-table. Lastly, whenever a person gets free time he could sharp his skills of work. Being skillful in work could reduce time in finishing task.
To conclude, I would like to say, most of people fail in maintain work and personal life eqully, because they are unable to managing time and they do not keep themselves in decipline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ask. To conclude, I would like to say, most of people fail in maintain work and personal life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93236714976 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49411077911 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3131008347 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0833333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09284944975 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385386771 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226208383143 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640128071918 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187581597045 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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