In this modern era, drug abuse by young generation are now becoming a proliferating pandemic that definitely needs an attention to diminish or to evacuate completely from the world as it has serious consequences. This essay will mention some important causative factors responsible for this recent outbreak and also point down the ill effects and tackling measures to deal this dilemma.
Young people, in particular school going children are dominated in figures of drug abuse. Although the backhand reasons are quite multifactorial, peer pressure are one of the predominant cause for this rising numbers of drug addicts. Influence from movies, internet websites which describes the all possible actions of drugs and also observing other elder addicted people will together impose children to experience temporary excitement of drugs and eventually indulge pressure on them. Several sociologists addressed in WHO 2005 world summit revealed that 60 percent of teenagers are now prone to use illegal drugs for relieving stress and ecstasy. In addition, psychology specialists explained that most of the drug addicts are diagnosed several neuropsychological diseases for example generalised anxiety disorder, Mania and Depression. It’s never to be forgotten that such children will lose their concentration in academics and keeping themselves away from family and pals which can lead to develop suicidal tendencies.
While thinking solutions, drug abuse is one such issue that can be hindered only by the effective cooperation, starting from local to governmental levels. First and foremost, advices and guidance should begin from family. Parents and other acquaintances are able to educate their child about the risks of using drugs that can devastate one’s body and soul. Educational institutions along with the support of government can play a major role in acknowledging the demerits of drugs and help them to aware which one is legal or illegal. Moreover, health team members which includes, psychiatrist, counselling member, social worker are capable to work with drug addicted child for drug withdrawal and dependence by making sure that child line numbers are 24*7 active.
To summarise everything, the only possible thing that we can do against drug abuse is giving continuous education and care to our children so as to vanish this alarming situation from the world.As a socially responsible individual,it is our duty to safeguard the young people from this life threatening virus in order to protect our future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53076923077 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9471668161 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4776228971 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.071428571 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773997923288 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276810303822 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285764912365 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434229678083 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220599387491 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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