People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views & give your own opinion
in this modern era, a section of people think living longer can increase business higher and higher whereas others think that growing in age have the ability to see pros and corns in society business, as well as the government in this essay, will examine both sides of the views and give my overall opinion
firstly, from overall perspective there are a wide range of numbers in growing business here we discuss some relevant examples if a person start a small business with some passion at an early age with certain ups and downs he brought to the running world with the extraordinary economy it benefits for their family members do not see any struggles as the first person look into it
however, aging population have many advantages in increasing society and government with economy and taxes paid to the government while others have big problems in way of thinking that growing population can lead to environmental defects and land area whereas in cites they struggle for jobs , living and eating
for instance , if a family want to shift to city they should find a place to live in near city aslo is more difficult and their children should study in this competitive world the education is more costly so, it benefits government but not the people
to sum up all , people living longer tends to medicine and treatment and it is more valuable to government and society so, that they can pay house tax and income for government will higher . in my opinion i would say that people aging is good for families and government it is not a big issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69852941176 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46464178883 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 136.0 20.2975951904 670% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 671.5 49.4020404114 1359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 639.0 106.682146367 599% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 136.0 20.7667163134 655% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 58.0 7.06120827912 821% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400539153435 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309906010276 0.084324248473 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600629774174 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204869324333 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089129823687 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 68.7 13.0946893788 525% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -58.1 50.2224549098 -116% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 55.2 11.3001002004 488% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.34 8.58950901804 155% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.4 10.1190380762 557% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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