People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment
it is general knowledge that the environment is being threatened each day through the public media. Although this issue has been regarded as an urgent problem to human being, there are not many individuals actually take actions to protect the environment. this can be explained by two reasons.
The first reason that can be taken into account is most people’s mindsets are deemed that environmental issues are the society’s responsibility rather than individuals. such people believes the problems is complicated for individuals to cope with. As the result, a majority of citizens become indifferent to the problems. Furthermore, the thought that environmental issues are future problems still exists. Due to that fact, people tends to pay more attention to the problems which marked as more compelling than environment such as heath, economy developing or employment shortage. Time and money are spent to solve those problems in lieu of the future predicted disaster.
Encouraging individuals to have more obligation toward the environmental is the best option currently, and governments should be the ones who play an active role in this process by choice of social media. it is necessary to start to draft acts or pass bills to prevent harmful actions against the environment. this will harness people from doing more harm by adding severly punishments. Proposing civilians to use more disposable products is another excellent methods. it is an incentive for human to get used to a friendly-environmental live.
there will always be the dilemma of developing or damaging the environment, but as single citizens, there are various things to do to alleviate the negative impact on the environment that caused by the human acitivies, and there is one famous qoute should be remembered “When there is a will, there is a way”. it depends on people wills to save the planet Earth now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28618421053 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12697133113 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6461760885 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279073516377 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752417220631 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485646821123 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15795463126 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415384063014 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.