Many catastrophic natural disasters occurred recently have made people realize how crucial the environment is to us. Tsunamis, earthquakes, hurricanes, etc. are responsible for huge numbers of casualties every year. Humans also have to depend on Mother Nature in certain industries such as agriculture and tourism. Unfortunately, many individuals are still ignorant and refuse to take responsibility to protect the environment. From my point of view, there are two major reasons explaining this reckless behaviour. In this essay, I plan to point out why people are being so indifferent and propose some feasible solutions to these complicated issues.
The first reason is that many people are uneducated on the ongoing environmental problems, especially those living in developing countries. Citizens of these countries consider pollution and resources depletion complicated and are problems of the future. They are unaware of the impacts that plastics, sewage, or chemical toxins have on nature. Research carried out in a rural area of Vietnam have shown that 60% of residents do not know why they should stop using plastic bags. Consequently, people keep treating the environment poorly, which will eventually result in its deterioration.
Another factor contributing to people's lack of actions toward environmental problems is that the eco-friendly lifestyle is quite hard to maintain. Humans have gotten used to such a reckless lifestyle of using plastic straws, plastic cups, and dumping wastes into the ocean. Moreover, the price of an environmentally-friendly lifestyle is definitely not affordable. Rather than buying costly metal straws and tote bags, people would pick plastic straws and plastic bags for for their cheap prices. All in all, a sustainable lifestyle to many people is extremely demanding.
To tackle this complex issue, the government and organizations should put out campaigns and advertisements in order to educate citizens more on the continuing environmental problems. Manufacturing eco-friendly goods should also be more invested in so that these products become less of a financial burden. Imposing certain restrictions on people’s behaviour toward nature is another suggestion from environmental activists.
To sum up, there are many reasons why people can be irresponsible for preserving the environment, two of which being lack of knowledge and difficulties in maintaining sustainable lifestyles. Countries' governments should take action immediately so that citizens pay more attention to the pollution crisis that humanity is currently facing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'depend'.
Suggestion: depend
...ualties every year. Humans also have to depends on Mother Nature in certain industries ...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ration. Another factor contributing to peoples lack of actions toward environmental pr...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... into the ocean. Moreover, the price of a environmentally-friendly lifestyle is d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71761658031 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2755714881 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593264248705 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1111870284 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.318181818 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19621965684 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050412555928 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513601098774 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103791833839 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551445122648 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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