People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint.

Submitted by vguerrini on Thu, 10/24/2019 - 05:31

Everyone constantly think about the “dream job” , which changes from person to person.
There are workers who would do the same steady job forever because it feels safe, while others can’t wait to try something different, new and challenging.
There are both positive and negative aspects about the changing or the not-changing of any employment.

There are several advantages for the ones who would rather stay in the same company for years. First of all it’s a well-know working environment with familiar colleagues. In addition if someone have been working for the same boss forever there could be the possibility to have slightly more flexible working hours, furthermore the risk of unemployment is dramatically low.
Anyhow there are also some disadvantages as the job could become annoying and unchallenging.

On the contrary people who need a constant change in their lives are unlike to bored at all.
Switching from job to job keeps workers career path full of adventure and it also helps to create an extremely interesting curriculum.
On the hand changing is really useful to find out what anyone’s talented to do, on the other hand it’s hard to improve specific skills needed for a certain job.
Another downside is the absence of working safety which leads to a high risk of unemployment, especially during crisis.

In conclusion it’s impossible to say which is the best decision to make when talking job opportunities and working lifestyles, it depends on the personality of any of us.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly think about the 'dream job' , which changes from person to person. T...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the not-changing of any employment. There are several advantages for the ones who...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nvironment with familiar colleagues. In addition if someone have been working for the sa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...liar colleagues. In addition if someone have been working for the same boss forever ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 163, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...festyles, it depends on the personality of any of us.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28744939271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93901551116 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8283258574 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288601030736 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957079105539 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536480558116 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102309701829 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465779001382 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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