People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
More and more people are now choosing to reside in big urban towns. As a result, they encounter numerous issues on a daily basis like pollution, however, there are some solutions for example urging city dwellers to move to the suburban areas.
Several problems have arisen from living in overcrowded cities. First, people face environmental issues like air pollution, noise pollution and water pollution. For instance, many families in the rural areas have to use contaminated water in their every day activities, or inhale toxic air, which is brought about by heavy traffic along with household waste. Consequently, city dwellers suffer from serious health hazards. Second, the high living costs have also taken a toll on people. Not only are the house rents higher in the cities, the costs of groceries, maintenance are extremely expensive, which have made many people live in poverty, devoid of any kind of luxuries. Moreover, some could not even afford to take up some hobbies like travelling.
Although, these problems have had detrimental effects on urban people, there are now several ways to improve this. The most efficient method is to encourage people to move to the outskirt of cities. This will be conducive to improving their health both physically and mentally, as the natural surrounding is less polluted. Beside, with the scared population, slow-pace life, people will have spare time to exercise. Second, by living in the small regional towns, the expenses are cheaper. Residents could afford bigger houses with a much smaller sum of money, and the provision is locally produced so it would be in a smaller price range. As a result, people could even put aside some money for future plans.
In conclusion, living in the rural areas could be troublesome. However, governments could impose some rules to improve in situation. I believe in the near future, people would follow the trend of moving to the outskirt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...put aside some money for future plans. In conclusion, living in the rural area...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13924050633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58962871754 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6447507259 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4736842105 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244272615472 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668680691084 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383189804405 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133136696967 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464034247992 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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