People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Theseday, people who living in large cities have to face with lots of tough in their everyday life. For instant: traffic jams, criminal, environment polution and rate of unemployment. I belive that the government encourage citizen to move to some smaller rural area.
On the one hand, the most essential problem that people who living in large city is traffic jams. There are several cause of this trend happens. First of all, the large amount of private transportation can lead to this problem. Second, this drawback can come from the imigrate people that can affect to the amount of transportation. To illustrate, during some rush hour, there are many car and bike on the road which can be stuck for hour. As a result, it can be take a lot of time to drive to your destination and you definitaly will be late. Moreover, the another drawback that the metropolitan people must face with is crime. There are many why the rate of criminal increase in several years. First, due to the increase in the rate of unemployment, the criminal social can be developed rapidly. For example, if the man don't have job that he required, he will focus on drug or he will become a robber. This might lead to the insecurity and unsafe life for residents.
On the other hand, in my opinion, I agree that the government should establish some policy to tackle these problems. For instant, create more job for citizen, encourage metropolitan people use public transport or encourage them to move to rural area for their better life with peaceful atmostphere and beautifull landmark.
In conclusion, with a lot of problem that the citizens have to deal with, the government should have some policies to encourage people to move to some small suburb areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cause seems to be countable; consider using: 'several causes'.
Suggestion: several causes
...n large city is traffic jams. There are several cause of this trend happens. First of all, th...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to this problem. Second, this drawback can come from the imigrate people that c...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun car seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cars'.
Suggestion: many cars
...trate, during some rush hour, there are many car and bike on the road which can be stuck...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bikes'?
Suggestion: bikes
... some rush hour, there are many car and bike on the road which can be stuck for hour...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eloped rapidly. For example, if the man dont have job that he required, he will focu...
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Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...idly. For example, if the man dont have job that he required, he will focus on drug...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...utifull landmark. In conclusion, with a lot of problem that the citizens have to deal with, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81605351171 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6364444762 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6513546722 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29996461756 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889203895509 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927026863 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2006723303 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058825572618 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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