People rarely make changes in their lives because it is their nature which gives them a better feel of having a constant life.
Normally when you get used to do something it will be hard to change it, but in this fast changing world, you have to change. Actually being constant in every aspect of life leads to get depressed in a long term. For example if you do not take modern technologies in your business and do not raise your knowledge, therefore you will not possibly obtain promotion.
I think the most obvious solution is to encourage cautious people to take risks in their life, for instance they can start with participating in a sport team to try new activities or they can take part in a book club to read new books. By doing this little and not dangerous things they will feel relax little by little to make changes and so they will make big changes easier.
This means that it takes time to reduce the resistance of making changes in their lives but when they see good results of the changing, they will be eager to do it again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to doing'.
Suggestion: used to doing
...constant life. Normally when you get used to do something it will be hard to change it,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46113989637 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28291119738 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59585492228 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0310756243 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228853231632 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102104834229 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555997564626 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141821595703 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337055806737 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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