It is believed that people generally are not willing to make changes in their lifestyle, which may not good for both society and themselves. The aim of this essay is to raise some problems occurred by this behavior and put forward to provide several measures that can be taken to improve the situation.
To begin with, the resistance to change may take away a person’s joy of life. Doing the same things every single day make people get bored and bored. As an example, a blue-collar worker who wakes up at 8 am every morning, going to work until 5 pm, coming back home, getting to sleep, again waking up at 8 am in the next day, and going to work, so on so forth. Consequently, this routine easily leads people to the feeling of no happiness.
Another problem can be raised is that resisting to change might harm the development of the country. To be precise, resisting buying new products cannot create profit. For instance, a new center mall is recently built up near your place but you are too accustomed to the small grocery next to your home and so not willing to have a try at the new mall. If all people in this area have the same thought then how can the new center mall exist?
Although many people naturally resist making changes in their lives, we can manipulate that with several measures. Firstly, education should be the root of any good attitude. Secondly, making an attempt to promote new things, get people to try. Thirdly, improve the convenience of the new things so that people can easily obtain it. By taking these measures, people may more willing to make changes in their lives.
To conclude, although people usually resist making changes and this may lead to a number of problems, some measures can be taken to improve this attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63375796178 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43464828513 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8699074408 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312635636334 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113063306914 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884627379915 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189569128634 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745231669854 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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