People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to
the development of communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays,a lot of people opt for work or live abroad and that is because of the development in the modern ways of communication and transportation as well. I agree that the advantages are more than the disadvantages and that will be discussed further in details.
It can be said that the drwabacks of being away from the home country is the lonely feeling and homesickness, despite the fact that air travel, phone calls and video calls are much easier that before, but that is not replace or compensate the face to face conversation with the family memebers and friends.
Despite the previous disadvantage, there are two main advantages of working or living abroad. Firstly, being alone is helping in being independent. In other words, it teachs the one the commitment and enhance the sense of responsibility. In addition to that, get to know various things from different people whether cultures or traditions. For example, the western people who are working in Asia or in the middle east, can discover different languages, religions and even food reciepes.
Secondly, thanks to the technology, it became much easier for some countries to broaden their horizones, if anyone wants to live or to work in these countries. In other words, some countries such as Uk or USA which suffering from shortags of healthcare givers can welcome african nurses or physician to work or to live there and an eminent example is Sir Magdy Yaccoup who left Egypt and became famous Cardiologist in Uk for more than 20 years.
In conclusion, I would say that living and working abroad has its merits which considered surplus the drawbacks and if parents can encourage their youngsters to travel from time to time, that will have a profound impact on their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00680272109 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78411074095 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8365064904 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145664400831 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578015939146 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575339038255 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837552734688 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702514347023 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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