People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do you advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that most of people always intend take all family member come to develop countries while they are working in another country now. While there are some drawbacks to take family to another country, I am of the opinion that the advantages will likely be more significant.
On the one hand, there are many disadvantages moving alone to other country to work. The first drawbacks of this is most children who have parent work abroad usually do not enough take care of than other children. For example, they are not study some skills to prepare for their life by their parent. Moreover, difficult to support their parent when they are ill. Finally, people will be felling boring sometime, it will ba effect for their emotion, health.
On the other hand, there are still many advantages with take their family to another country. Firstly they have a well life with good condition from development country such as environment, attitude, how to working are usually better. Secondly, economic of these countries are development so they are can earn much money to support their family. In addition, opportunity about education for student is well, helping improve some skill like community, working a group... Moreover, their career will be update with several large companies.
In conclusion, while there are many disadvantages regarding take family come to another country to live, I believe the benefits from this trend is significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
It is true that most of people always intend take all family member co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08438818565 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54177999674 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.687125893 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384811394102 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131600186691 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685859546486 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236657155666 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338515224758 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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