It can not be denied that advertisement is more and more popular on over the world. Some people think that this phenomenon is negative because it affects people’s lives. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with this statement because of many reasons: create a diversity of employment opportunities and help brands/companies to tell customers about their products and services.
The first reason is that advertisements create a diversity of employment opportunities. In other words, it provides occupations for artists, content creators, designers, video editors, etc. For example, there are lots of celebrities who are invited to become ambassadors/KOLs for brands or projects. They receive money from some brands or organizations. This lead to other positions such as content creators, designers, video editors having more job opportunities. They are also significant people in advertising.
The second reason is that advertisements help companies to tell customers about their products and services. Thanks to advertisements, customers can know about newly-launched products, promotions. They can use meaningful messages to attract audiences and make audiences feel an impression. For instance, before Skinceuticals has an official store in Vietnam, they have many advertisements. They booked lots of celebrities, KOLs, influencers to advertise their store. It is an advantage because it helps customers can buy authentic skincare products. One other example is to advertise a new talk show “Tam Su Cung Thuy Van” on YouTube of my company. We advertised this talk show through different platforms like YouTube channel, fanpages, online newspapers. This talk show was bought the copyright and broadcast by VTVgo.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that advertisements have benefits in our life. Advertisements are also a part of our life. Customers should choose suitable and meaningful advertisements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7649122807 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38727181396 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8684931748 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2380952381 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122500786959 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391464158763 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068041072509 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804109432435 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592400587521 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.