People should focus more on solving problems related to the future, and should not spend time thinking about the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is true that, people must be more aware about the forthcoming years in all aspects including health, environment and whole living situations rather than concentrating on which is gone. However, in this essay do not agree with the statement because, people need the ability to consider the past and protect ancestral things together with the up coming problems.
Firstly, nobody can live without giving respect towards the outcome of precursor protection on the earth. All the facilities and amenities which is present has to be the matter of debate and liability to keeps on for next generation. In fact, this world may not be present somehow the old generation whether they do not think about their past so as to now which is the responsibility of everyone who live now to study and research about the past and do the needful to be securing the earth. For instance, monuments from stone age were guarded by the government would be the result of many tourism and economic development in globally.
Similarly, it is a fact that to be concentrate on future in terms of well being and sustainability of every offspring in earth. Many natural resources and material should be use in limited amount and save for coming years would lead to be earth in safe zone. Excessive water wasting, increased use of plastic and natural resources like coal, oil and fossil fuels may be the absence of stability of earth and serious hazards over there. For example, global warming and climbing number of natural disasters must be serious problems to study.
To conclude, owing to the fact of future problem would make everybody to listen to the past in some extent and nobody get ride of focus on prime time than present or hereafter years. So that, previous years or issues should be consider along with next.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the up coming problems. Firstly, nobody can live without giving respect t...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ther they do not think about their past so as to now which is the responsibility of ever...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tourism seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much tourism', 'a good deal of tourism'.
Suggestion: much tourism; a good deal of tourism
...y the government would be the result of many tourism and economic development in globally. ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...atural resources and material should be use in limited amount and save for coming y...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...n to the past in some extent and nobody get ride of focus on prime time than presen...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...hat, previous years or issues should be consider along with next.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, similarly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56589658124 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5332485974 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146033043194 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04851096593 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049146225885 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972953014967 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046045259306 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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