People should follow the customs and traditions when
people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Many people argue that foreigners should accommodate the local traditions and customs when they become a new resident. I completely agree with this point of view.
Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not adopt the norms of social behaviour in the host country. When coming to a new country, you have to carefully figure out their culture as well as regulation and law system. For example, an entrepeneur who plans to set up a business must look for an advisory firm or research by themselves about the legal of the host nation. Another instance, when you first come to a country and plan to live there for a long time, the basic thing you have to learn is traffic law, like in Vietnam, people walk on the right as follow the law while in America, joggers walk on the left side. Every country has their own rules so immigrant should integrate to become an official resident of that nation.
Moreover, when you own a business and wish to maximise your profit, your mission is definitely seeking for customers to boost the revenue, the majority of your customers will come from the host nation, so that you have to meet their need that is suitable with their tastes and culture. In addition, if you come to another place and follow the rule, it proves that you are showing your respect for the local, as a result, you will receive more welcoming and hospitalities, this helps you take part in community life and avoid social isolation.
To sum up, it is essential for new resident to learn about the customs and culture of the local community in oder to integrate fully into society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...ke in Vietnam, people walk on the right as follow the law while in America, joggers walk ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66784452297 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46332587745 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2996635255 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219445240644 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846307680782 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05207983612 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13258422343 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495441168453 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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