People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether people should preserve their health for personal benefits or for social responsibilities is still debated. On my opinion, I think we need to be interested in ourselves for both purposes aboved.
On the one hand, when people protect their health, their will take tremendous advantages. The first postive is that they might avoid some diseases related the aged group such as diabetes, heart disease and high-blood pressure. Human’s lifespan would be longer as a result of reserving a healthy lifestyle every day. Good appearance is another advantage should be considered. For example, if children are brought up by a balanced diet with a variety of vegetables, fruits and protein from animals, they will reach an ideal height during the their developing process.
On the other hand, I am still convinced that caring of healthy condition is not only for ourselves, but also for advantages of society. A justifiable reason is that when an individual are sick, they might be a threaten to the public. In fact, some outbreak of diseases like H5N1 or SARs happen partly because individuals condition was not exactly mesured. Besides, unhealthy individuals would put a pressure on the economy. The government might have to invest a huge amount of tax for treatments and cures instead of give a priority for education and various issues in the country.
In conclusion, I apartly agree that people will take various positives when they are ware of how important their health is, but I also impress that protecting our medical problems is a effective way to protect others in the society, therefore this is also obviously our responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 542, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... they will reach an ideal height during the their developing process. On the other hand,...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n an individual are sick, they might be a threaten to the public. In fact, some outbreak o...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that protecting our medical problems is a effective way to protect others in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85998541787 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.968365174 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22899256567 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759357408587 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876146498978 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145628061824 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695111619383 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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