People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The problem of compassionate attitude towards creatures has always aroused sharp debated among passionate nature lovers. Proceeding from this, an opinion exists that mankind should stop eating meat due to the atrocity reason, as growing animals for consumption Is inappropriate. Although I believe that this phenomenon is associated with the suffering of living creatures, people should not refuse eating meat products.
On the one hand, meat processing industry is a business, which sets profits above the suffering of others. Animals rising on industrial scale are considered as a source of income not as beloved pets. Unfortunately, it is hard to expect that in those industrial farms the entire life cycle of livestock passes without pain and suffering. For instance, the movie Earthlings created by vegan and eco activist Sean Monson is dedicated to this topic and attracted a lot of international attention. Thus, it is necessary to recognize that problem of cruelty towards animals involved in the meat industry remains relevant.
On the other hand, proper nutrition is vital for the healthy person’s formation and development. Meat protein acts as building blocks for creating muscles, bones, skin and other organs and supports the immune system functioning. These characteristics are crucial during the period of child’s growth as a balanced diet determines their future. For example, in 2019, vegan parents starved to death a two-year-old child in Florida, forcing him to eat fruits only. Hence, the role of meat protein in the growth and formation of healthy offspring should not be underestimated.
To conclude, even though beasts are kept on industrial farms in harsh conditions, the protein they supply is vital for people. Taking all these factors into account, I believe that people should not reject meat products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43554006969 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87732314042 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627177700348 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.5216119553 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226324356924 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675410360613 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700143079972 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132752187411 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771885716376 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.