People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is that sleep deprivation. The causes of this phenomenon are varied and have led to wide range of effects on human life. In this essay, I will outline why do people sleep less is occurring and discuss the impacts it can have on people.
From an overall perspective, one of the main causes of the problem is that cutting-edge technological advance such as the high speed internet, gaming computers, and modern smartphones. These devices are give people, especially young adults, a lot of fun like surfing websites, playing almost real 3D games, and chatting with friends for many hours, reducing sleep hours considerably. Secondly, today the society is becoming more competitive. By this I mean people have become busier than ever before in order to suffer from this competition and live happy and well.
The results of sleep deficiency are numerous and potentially serious. Perhaps the most serious consequence is that insomnia. According to the study conducted by American National Health Center, if one is being lack of sleep more than two weeks, it will affects his entire body negatively and grow risks to get insomnia. A second consequence is that health problems, especially mental health problems. For example, the study showed that last year (by 2018) more than 10 million adolescents addicted to mobile game named ‘PUBG’ and they had sleep deficiency, which in turn leads to hurt their mental health.
To recapitulate, sleep deprivation is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future, due to the reasons such as technological advances and competitive community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...k of sleep more than two weeks, it will affects his entire body negatively and grow ris...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks getting'.
Suggestion: risks getting
...cts his entire body negatively and grow risks to get insomnia. A second consequence is that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22592592593 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86280005286 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1022359508 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286525700758 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895070280428 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877250657362 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164353658938 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116916573546 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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