People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings?What are the importance of these celebration?Do you think people really spend too much?
celebrations have become a norm these days among people.it is generally said that an excessive amount is being spent of celebrations such as birthdays and weddings.this essay will highlight how important it is to celebrate and elaborate that certainly people are spending enormously.
The most prominent reason that why parties are crucial to perform is because individuals can get relief from their hectic schedule after working for a long period of time. Celebrating gives masses the opportunity to take a break from their tiring schedule, and they are able to take rest and enjoy as a result. Resultantly, their performance increases significantly. Moreover,by becoming a part of other's celebrations,people get inspired and they strive towards attaining the same which definitely is a positive side of celebrations. Because of these reasons, it is inevitable for individuals to have parties.
However, spending too much is usually the negative side of this trend.To exemplify, people, during birthdays, spend a lot of money on food and most of the time they waste the food and rest of the food end up in dustbins. Throwing cake on people's face has become common among people. Despite wasting this money on unnecessary desires, people could use it to fulfil rudimentary requirements. similar trends can be seen in other cases too such as in weddings where more than sufficient members are invited. Therefore,people should be wise about spending money .
in conclusion, this essay discusses the primes reason of people celebrating these events and how it in many cases is a wastage of money. I believe that although it is entirely decisive to do celebrations,it should not be on the cost of a huge ratio of money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31617647059 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56085784184 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2303254987 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276786123387 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829111800279 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699434577243 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152155594031 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929946122161 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.