People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and the society so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree.
In today's society, more and more workers extended hours for working and that brings too much effected on themselves , their families and the communities. I totally agree that hours working should be limited.
In some decades ago, the average daily working hours was completely lower than the present so it did not have a huge effect on an individual worker. But now, the employees are facing with serious problems, especially their health when they work so much. My friend, for example, who are now running a Clothes Company, are suffering from anxiety disorders because of extended hours working. Most employees who work more than 14 hours per day will fatigue to more serious problems like sick leave, anxiety disorders or even stoke.
Not only individual worker are affected when working so much but also their families and society are affected too. The first problem is that exhausted employees bring low productivity and the economics foundation will be significant went down. Another problem is it has serious consequences for family relationship. Each member in family just has a little time to built up the relationship and that is never enough to have a close-knit family.
In conclusion, nowadays working extended hours is becoming popular , especially in developed nations. This trend brings so much serious consequences not only for themselves but also for the relatives and community. I personally support that time working should be limited by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23305084746 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72292573409 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9370147488 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342289051771 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135979867228 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106536440314 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234125019439 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915808568793 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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