People these days watch TV, films, and other programs alone rather than with other people.
Do the advantages of the development outweigh the disadvantages?
As privacy has been highly valued, individuals tend to view films and other programs in solitude. While there are valid concerns about this phenomenon, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, opponents of individual television viewing emphasize the potential for isolation. When the family members sit in their own rooms, enjoying watching their favorite programs, the amount of time they spend with each other may be reduced, which means that their cohesive bond may be compromised. Additionally, such a trend leads to a increase in the demand for television, which is known as one of the most expensive forms of advanced technology. Inflation is likely to occur and the economic progress as a whole of various nations can be impeded.
On the other hand, despite the above-mentioned legitimate concerns, there are beneficial effects on the viewers' viewing experience that justify the popularity of watching films in a private place. Chief among these is that watchers have the freedom to enjoy their favorite programs at their preferred volume without asking for the permission of someone else. This cannot be achieved by watching with other people due to considerable time spent in figuring out a shared interest to choose a movie that all parties can find enjoyment in. Another point worth considering is that watching alone can alleviate their concerns about being subjected to criticism when individuals provide comments on a scene of the film they are watching. A scientist has done a survey, requiring participants to answer their experience of sharing a favorite movie with their loved ones. The final results show that 80% of them hesitate to articulate their viewpoints about the film because of the fear of being criticized, and they find themselves more satisfied with the viewing experience in solitude.
In conclusion, while enjoying films alone can be potentially detrimental to some degree, the benefits overshadow the drawbacks. It is recommended that people curtail their television consumption to mitigate the severity of such development
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ed. Additionally, such a trend leads to a increase in the demand for television, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35347432024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90831282934 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9125060485 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19766364236 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655048328145 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490516460581 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124823484729 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471202862213 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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