People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
The industrialization of society has lead to the drastical increase of transportation devices, especially personal vehicles like cars, motorbikes and other massive vehicles like trucks, trains,..etc. Most of these vehicle use fossil fuel like diesel, coal, which emits carbon dioxide - a contamination for the environment. Some people argue that the price for fuel should be increased to reduce and eliminate pollution. In my perspective, I am not agree with this resolution, for the following reasons.
First and foremost, fuel plays a pivotal role in the seamless flow of production. If the price of fuel increase drastically, it may hinder car users to switch from their personal transportation to public ones. However, it would also affect other industries that also rely on fuel to operate like electricity, heating, manufactoring,..etc. Without sufficient source of reasonably priced fuel, these industry will not be in their best form of operation and development. Therefore, the tradeoff is not optimal to implement this solution.
Furthermore, there are better solution to to resolve environmental issue. For example, vehicles that utilize green power like biogas or electricity would display a more significant effect on eliminating potential threats from original power source like toxic waste, carbon emission. In order to develop and finalise these solution, optimal fuel cost is crucial. Even though it might have a bad influence on the environment in the short term, it will redeem itself and pay off well in the long run.
In conclusion, increasing the price of fuel is not a definitive solution to environmental pollution. Instead, focusing on sustainable energy source proven to be more reliable in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...her massive vehicles like trucks, trains,..etc. Most of these vehicle use fossil f...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...er massive vehicles like trucks, trains,..etc. Most of these vehicle use fossil fu...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this vehicle' or 'these vehicles'?
Suggestion: this vehicle; these vehicles
...cles like trucks, trains,..etc. Most of these vehicle use fossil fuel like diesel, coal, whic...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... pollution. In my perspective, I am not agree with this resolution, for the following...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...like electricity, heating, manufactoring,..etc. Without sufficient source of reaso...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ike electricity, heating, manufactoring,..etc. Without sufficient source of reason...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this industry' or 'these industries'?
Suggestion: this industry; these industries
...cient source of reasonably priced fuel, these industry will not be in their best form of opera...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Message: Did you mean 'this solution' or 'these solutions'?
Suggestion: this solution; these solutions
...ssion. In order to develop and finalise these solution, optimal fuel cost is crucial. Even tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52434456929 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21747177734 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2867479411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230159332905 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727367048678 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601434727385 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132112374362 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644846338783 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.