people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solution?
Safety has become a serious problem these days as a number of people report that they are afraid to be in and leave their houses. In this essay, I will examine the reasons on this appealing as well as provide what actions should be taken to overcome this problem.
There are some reasosn why people feel unsafe. Firstly, is an increasing criminal cases. Criminal actions can be so dangerous for people. By november 2021 in Indonesia, as the number of murder acts increased, people in several areas were friegthening. Secondly, is corona virus. This devastating virus can damage people’s health in a hasty manner, and in some cases lead to death. Heart attack, respiratory problem are two of the deadliest spot which can be attacked by corona virus. If the criminal rate and corona virus were still appeal, there would be more unsafety feelings.
However, there are several solutions to cope with this phenomenon. First and foremost, is to tackle criminal seriously. More police in the road patrol every hour is needed to reduce criminal acts. Furthermore, a long-sentence to the suspect is required to give a detrimental effect. Finland and Croatia showed that with good supervisior and rules criminality can easily be handled. Second, vaccination is the only way to deal with virus. If people have already get vaccinated, their immune will works well and make them less affected.
In conclusion, criminality and virus which are appeling these days are the reason why people feel unsafe. Thus, more protection by the government and vaccine are crucial to solve this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'case'?
Suggestion: case
...afe. Firstly, is an increasing criminal cases. Criminal actions can be so dangerous f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r people. By november 2021 in Indonesia, as the number of murder acts increased, ...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tating virus can damage people’s health in a hasty manner, and in some cases lead to death. Hear...
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Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appealed'.
Suggestion: appealed
...iminal rate and corona virus were still appeal, there would be more unsafety feelings....
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...deal with virus. If people have already get vaccinated, their immune will works wel...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ready get vaccinated, their immune will works well and make them less affected. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07279693487 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65264734278 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9762602285 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6842105263 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837932262986 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245598960471 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331284301202 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545137553656 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200747275866 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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