People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
There are at least two major reasons why people nowadays have to confront serious risks no matter when they are. Firstly, the unemployment and the widening gap between the rich and the poor are crucial factors behind the rising crime rate in many nations, hence citizens have to be watchful all the time even when they stay at home. Vietnam, for instance, has recently seen a significant increase in the number of people turning to crime such as burglary and robbery in order to survive. Secondly, when being out on the streets, everyone is aware of the dangers stemming from the dramatic increase in traffic. For example, the Global status report on road safety 2015 by the World Health Organization showed that around 1.25 million people worldwide die each year as a result of road traffic crashes.
To solve these aforementioned problems, some measures should be implemented. The first measure would be to provide more job training programs to help people out of poverty and into employment, so the need to steal from others would be reduced and the public would feel safer. Additionally, it is necessary to install surveillance cameras on trains and buses and along main roads because if there is a close and regular supervision in traffic, everyone who uses the roads will strictly obey traffic laws, thus the frequency of traffic accidents would be reduced in the long-term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56751868538 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9402718847 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127054906224 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541359474359 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455231042366 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946374290243 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571065945283 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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