People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
In contemporary society, people are inclined to relocate their living places for various times, in contrast to the past when residents lived stably in same urban areas during their lives. This essay will present an overview of causes and potential effects to this phenomenon.
Firstly, economic disparity between major cities and smaller cities is widely perceived as the main reason. Nowadays, many demographic studies have shown that although it is invisible, unbalanced economic growth has encouraged rural citizens to move to metropolises and developing cities, which is a stepping-stone to bright career paths. For example, many workers have chosen to leave their motherlands and migrate to cities with prosperous economies and plentiful job sources for more employment opportunities and higher incomes. Secondly, another factor that has added fuel to the fire is the ever-growing population. According to researches, the growth of population is accompanied by the high demand for living conditions. As a result, people tend to move to new modern places where they can have access to larger open space and better facilities.
In evaluating its impact, it is important to take potential consequences on family and society into account. From economic perspective, the job market will become more competitive because of the sharp growth in applicants, which impacts on the sustainability of macro-economic performance . From the view of family unity, families where childrens migrate to other places in search of better jobs are increasingly popular, ideological conflicts and gap generations are common between parents and childrens. As a result, they seldom have bonding time to build good rapports.
In conclusion, economic inequality and the growing population are the main reasons, which have negative influences on society and family as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ainability of macro-economic performance . From the view of family unity, families...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60424028269 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99318764651 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8043657204 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162083570979 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504268710413 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586845807968 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904449681407 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638676188081 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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