People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviours expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Torists comes to another states in the world should adjust with the habits and conducts correspond by the own country. They should not hope the own country to respect with discrepancy from the habits and conducts. I totally agree with this opinion and think that every single person want to sight another country required to respect with different ways such as habits or conducts.
First of all, respect every distinction from another states can create new knowledge about the culture. Every nations is have own rule and should be obtaines as society in that country and from that rule will be appear some habits which steadily run every day. Moreover, what happened in their own life can't changed from foreign people that visit their country, and when someone go to their country should be follow the habits and don't unrespect with the habits, because from their customs can make our knowledge is rise, we can learn about it and we can practice it in our own life if the habits was positif effect. For instance, in Korea, when a person eat don't make a noice because in their opinion it is not respect for the food and it is not polite, and i think this habits can be good customs if we practice in our daily activity. That's why every distinct from foreign country must be selected because several habits have ability to carry postive effect for life.
Secondly, cappable for keep good name of our country. When we have affairs or doing something in people's country we should have a good attitude. In other words, courtesy can reveal out justify and usual every countries have the different behaviours foremost in a person, if we visit some country maybe we will see their nature and courtesy is very not match with our style, while we must respect it because if we unrespect, it will make our country being a bad label in their eyes. For example, in America, inhabitants who have a work always do everything quickly and it is impressed rough, on the other hand, they are do it because of demand their job and that is was being their behaviours and so we must accept it. Thus, behaviours of someone is always fluctuation it's depands from where we dwelling.
To conclude, where we go we must put our responsible to respect every variation among every single person in the world especially about customs and behaviours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...create new knowledge about the culture. Every nations is have own rule and should be ...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...wledge about the culture. Every nations is have own rule and should be obtaines as...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...dge about the culture. Every nations is have own rule and should be obtaines as soci...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...reover, what happened in their own life cant changed from foreign people that visit ...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...t visit their country, and when someone go to their country should be follow the h...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'followed'?
Suggestion: followed
...n someone go to their country should be follow the habits and dont unrespect with the ...
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Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...country should be follow the habits and dont unrespect with the habits, because from...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r instance, in Korea, when a person eat dont make a noice because in their opinion i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for the food and it is not polite, and i think this habits can be good customs i...
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Line 2, column 767, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... food and it is not polite, and i think this habits can be good customs if we practi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...s if we practice in our daily activity. Thats why every distinct from foreign country...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ssed rough, on the other hand, they are do it because of demand their job and that...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...it because of demand their job and that is was being their behaviours and so we mu...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...because of demand their job and that is was being their behaviours and so we must a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31720994616 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.64907311 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0714285714 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177057367265 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706332771598 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472156433605 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106894521364 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489666073712 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.