People who have original ideas, or people who discover or invent things, are of greater value to society than people who are simply able to copy the ideas of others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Please write at least 250 words
It has been argued that those who create and invent things are more significant for human beings than normal people who just imitate others. I totally disagree with this opinion and I believe that both of those people are indispensable for the development of the whole society.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the contributions made by creative and innovative people have played a valuable role in evolution. Regardless of different eras, noble ideas, inventions and discoveries have made a huge difference in solving the problems people faced with. To be more specific, thanks to some remarkable scientists’ inventions, all the new strategies to generate energy in the Second Industrial Revolution highly improved people’s living standards. In this way, people could not respect those great brains too much.
However, the value created by the people with original ideas cannot shadow the efforts made by ordinary people. Without the majority of people, inventors and scientists are not able to produce the final products that they design due to the limited number of them. For instance, industrialization could not be achieved even with the smartest minds in the Second Industrial Revolution if there were no workers in the industries following their advanced thoughts. Millions of people were involved in the revolution and changed society through copying. Thus, the power of people who can mimic great thoughts cannot be underestimated.
In conclusion, our society needs people with fresh ideas to guide others so that all the members can participate in the development and work together to make a change. When we give great credits to innovationists, we need to be grateful to those who are following the lead as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ose who are following the lead as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27338129496 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89017976456 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9189721156 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28799237415 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101661629237 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644830217866 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174474806806 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363421060847 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.