in one generation ago, everything goes smoothly but at the present time a lot of people suffer from number of problems in the capital cities. because of everything is not on their place and many countries goes to the concrete jungle. In This essay I will look some of the reasons why many problems produce between the society and I will propose some solutions. One of the biggest problem facing people who live in the high property prices. In many countries. purchase the house nearby the capital cities is very pricy because there are quite bit of buildings therefore there are little chance to purchase house. If we take as an example of London, people have not amenity to buy house in there and house prices are not inadequate to the society. To solve this problem, the government should eat away house prices in large cities and they should build affordable houses to the people. Another issue is traffic congestion and greenhouse gases in concrete jungle. Most big cities full with cars and they are produce exhaust fumes. after that, it becomes to air pollution. I consider that, a lot of illnesses come from exhaust fumes. For instance, if person is breath in from Indian air , this is equivalent with consume one bunch of alcohol production. For tackle this issue, government should cutting the number of vehicles and planting a lot of trees and flowers in the cities. Finally, another problem is the quality and cost of public transport. in many capitals, public transport system is unavailable and inefficient to serve the people. In many cases, ticket prices are too high which is easy to go A to B with public transport. many depriving families spend a lot of money to transport. I reckon that, the government reduce the amount of prices for public transport and provide with some opportunities which is depends on transportation system. To sum up, although it is clear that cities face range of problems, it is difficult to tackle these problems and quality of life should enhance in the large cities. On the horizon these kind of problems may break away in world wide.
- People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life What are the most significant of these problems How can these problems be tackled 78
- People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life What are the most significant of these problems How can these problems be tackled 78
- All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, so, therefore, for instance, i reckon, kind of, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79944289694 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52571802528 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512534818942 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2357564832 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234153186103 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640753342257 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910693810112 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234153186103 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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