Food is the indispensable part of everyone's life for survival in this modern era.Presently,children are suffering from many health concerns such as overweight,digestive problems and many more by eating unhealthy food.Here I would like to talk about causes and effects along with solutions.
There are manifold points which support my point of view.First and foremost,unhealthy food eating habites are the main cause of overweight among the children.For example,children prefer to eat fast food such as burger,snacks and manymore which are not fruitful for the health of children.Besides this,children want to make their life easy so that they like to eat food on bed. Thence,children become overweight by eating spices food which effect the health of adolescents.
Further emphasizing my point of view,indoor activities are also the cause of overweight in juveniles.For example, children have tendency to play indoor games such as video games and many more which make them more fatty and unhealthy. Apart from it,they do not show interest in outdoor games. Hence,children suffer from many concerns which is not good for their future.
There are some solutions to overcome this problem. Parents should encourage the children regarding the importance of health. Apart from it, parents should join the children in sport academies for take part in games. Moreover, government should organised the sports events in order to stimulate children towrd games.
To recapitulate, overweight is becoming the serious problem among children. Government and parents should joint responsibility to nip up this evil from the bud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57894736842 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39784428258 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.573864749 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148776178249 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633237658668 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274879269187 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906101849558 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149923574427 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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