The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
Child obesity has gone up to the almost quarter. This problem existed specifically in the west. In addition to that, this is very dangerous for children. This essay will appear firstly, the causes of overweight, and secondly, the effects that may happen because of the causes.
First of all, overweight disease has numerous of causes. They pose a huge threat on children health. There are various number of causes, but this essay is going to show a handful of some reasons of corpulence. Studies say that hereditary rotundity is very common cause of obesity. Furthermore, thyroid illness plays a major role in this case. Moreover, not following a proper diet is considered the biggest reason. Sundry kids didn't do daily exercises, but now, they practice more and more. For example, In Japan, since a decade, children weren't doing any exercise and they neglected the issue, but in these days, they do a lot of practice and they go to the gym.
This matter has multi monuments, and these effects may hinder the future of those young people. A lot of chronic diseases are happened because of fatness like diabetes, heart disease and strokes, digestion problems, and certain types of cancer. Obesity also can cause some psychological matter such as depression and lack of self-confidence. Psychiatrists game proven because they are so slower than the others because of their giant bodies.
Finally, obesity has changed many people's lives for the worse. Young people are the vigor of any society where they live. The media and the Ministry of Health should spread awareness in all parts of society to warn about the severity of fatness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06227106227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55826126901 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.488830126 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144552307984 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043398168166 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384818475689 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907393715353 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624115605546 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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