THE PERCENTAGE OF OVERWEIGHT CHILDREN IN WESTERN SOCIETY HAS INCREASED BY 20 % IN THE LAST 10 YEARS. DISCUSS THE CAUSES AND EFFECTS OF THIS DISTURBING TREND
In the last 10 years, the number of children who weighs more than the ideal weight has increased by 20% in the western world. This trend is very disturbing especially for the parents since the health of their child might be at risk. There are causes why this issues occurred and its effect can lead to some serious health problems.
There are plenty of reasons why a child is overweight and sometimes the one to blame are the parents. First reason is that parents think that big children are cute and healthy that’s why they feed the child more that the ideal amount of food to be given. Second is that children are fond of eating fast food and parents allow it because sometimes it serves as a reward or treat. These issues are often neglected by parents especially when they ae busy and no time to cook healthy food for their children.
Children’s health might be at risk if they continue to be overweight and become obese. They can develop some serious health problems like diabetes, high blood pressure or some heart problems if not controlled. The child’s self-esteem might be also affected and may cause them to be bullied that may lead to depression. These effects will be very serious if not given any attention.
Therefore I conclude, that children’s obesity in western countries are sometimes caused by parents and its effects can lead to some serious issues like health problems, low self-esteem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87346938776 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58625463484 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.046000816 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201205001565 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768582682901 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753069509149 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140517228757 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111885686042 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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