A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old - fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent days, people are becoming to value social status and material worths of a person rather than honor, politeness, and trust and they believe that these characteristics are old-fashioned. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement and there are many other things that are not comparable with money.
On the one hand, it is true that almost everything around us can be measured by money. This leads people to focus on money in order to have material things and improve their worth. Recent social media, glamour magazines, and television shows, which are advertised luxurious, expensive objects, encourage people to have and to value them.
Nevertheless, believe that there are many other individuals who value the price of, to be honest, kind, and trusted. They said that these are long-lasting, more valuable, and could no be measured by money. In some way, most of us want to create honest friendships, a loving family, trusted relationships, and to raise our children to be polite citizens. Additionally, more and more people tend to spend their money on education rather than buying material things and on charity rather on glamour parties and events. According to a study from Harvard University shows that in 2020, people spent less money on a material thing by 2 % less than in 2019.
In conclusion, it is apparent that modern, advanced technologies and influential people's glamour consumptions cause ordinary individuals to interested more in material worth and social status but many other young people are starting to understand the real value of life and prefer the old-fashioned conscience.
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- A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honor kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... long-lasting, more valuable, and could no be measured by money. In some way, most...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... prefer the old-fashioned conscience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19157088123 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86847487815 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3678786412 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205324998613 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785530996879 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548459318526 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140280370171 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726665189834 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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