A person spends most of his or her time at the workplace, and life becomes meaningless when there is no job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Work has become a pivotal part in modern life as today people are often characterized as a work obsessive. Therefore, as some people argue, the lack of job satisfaction will lead to a hollow life. However, I would object to this viewpoint because a meaningful life does not come from only job fulfillment.
Admittedly, the non-existence of job satisfaction at the workplace presents a hindrance to the full enjoyment of one’s life. As people normally spend almost half of their day at the workplace and even more on doing their work at home, their job has become such an integral factor which can have a profound domino effect on other aspects of their life such as health, family, and social circles. Therefore, should there be workplace dissatisfaction, people will incur dramatic mood swings as their feelings have been suppressed for the whole day. For instance, having endured harsh criticism from the manager at the office, the father of a family may take his anger out on the mother or the children and seriously hurt their feelings. This shattered familial bond will correlate with an emotionally empty and meaningless life for that father.
However, I would argue that job satisfaction is not the sole determinant of a meaningful life for a person. It is because a meaningful life emanates from a multitude of factors ranging from leisure activities to social networking. Therefore, if the level of job dissatisfaction remains at an acceptable level, people can still relish their life from other aspects of life. Even to some, an occupation is only considered a means to an end to assist them to accomplish other more vital life goals. To exemplify, many young people nowadays take travel bloggers as their side job because their main occupation cannot quench their thirst for traveling and horizon-broadening experiences. However, they still attach themselves to their main jobs only for the sake of a stable financial resource for their hobby: traveling.
In conclusion, job satisfaction plays a critical role but not the mere contributory factor for a purposeful life since life fulfillment pertains to many other aspects like hobbies and social networking. Nevertheless, it is still more imperative to land a job from which one can derive genuine satisfaction with a view to a sense of all-rounded life satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13089005236 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01315609843 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2643278421 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195800955161 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766825881076 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048621415458 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131179111463 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271262356879 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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