The personal information of many individuals is lead by large Internet companies and organisations do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
In this modern era, server Internet well cities and social networking apps search as Facebook Google Flipkart and Amazon are securing the confidential data of users during their signup process. In my opinion, the benefits of disservice outweigh its disadvantages this essay will analyse both aspects in detail with relevant examples.
There are 2 major benefits of recording the personal information of the user firstly this data is used to post a relevant advertisement on the web page for people this is because during the registration process people often experience their likes and dislikes therefore This correlation sends customer-friendly ads, which helps users to purchase their desired product or services. Secondly, these electronic media use customer’s data to make their service convenient and flexible. In other word, these enterprise combine customer Internet and advice and developer user friendly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states that they use customer data to improve their services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this enterprise' or 'these enterprises'?
Suggestion: this enterprise; these enterprises
...convenient and flexible. In other word, these enterprise combine customer Internet and advice an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ndly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states th...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
...ndly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85864232416 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.482951862 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.4 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106500221079 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550616916285 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391479429447 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894574636938 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194109916445 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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