Physical activities are considered to be very useful and much important in today 's world.what according to you,are the advantage of these activities?
It is true that health plays a vital role in human being life whereas physical exertion have very consuming more than essential in these days even if there are several reasons behind this.I think that they would pros for individual can do of these activities.
There are predominant nowadays people have very curious about their sedentary lifestyle so that adolescent has doing plenty exercise in every day as well as they should much more strong on body while youth must not do any activities as far as they .can weak for body nor mental not strong that's what exercise should improving the health is wealth.In facts, kids should need to play pysical games or juvenile might awareness about outdoor games.
Moving towards,there are plethora merits teenager should want to start corpal games in their school life.Then,children can play games they have superb change to playing games on interinational level such as football,tennis,cricket,badminton,run,jump and so on.Eventually,they have good abilities to choose their career in this field.Consequently, senior citizens are doing walk,yoga neither older never need to treatments either they everlasting heath or fitness and health in whole life.
All said and done,I reckon exercise is backbone and giving long heath life style even if people must mental or physical hard.Thus,this is the advantage of physical exertion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, i reckon, i think, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47441860465 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81167260215 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.388601879 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.25 106.682146367 276% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.75 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 7.06120827912 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943258083278 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627366857193 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038429996625 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627366857193 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038429996625 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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