The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The 2 pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. The data was shown in the precentage of average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
Overall it can be seen that the highest part of the total expenditures was other goods ans services in Japan and the largest part of total expenditures was housing in Malaysia.
Regarding to first pie chart in Japan, othergoods and services 29% that got the biggest precentage, followed by food which had 24%, the third category was housing which got 21% the fourth category was transport which got 20% and the last was healthcare which got 6%
On the other hand in Malaysia, housing was 34% that had the largest precentage, afterward food which got 27%, the next was other and good services which had 26%, there after was transport which got 10% and the lastly was healthcare which had 3%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
...art of the total expenditures was other goods ans services in Japan and the largest p...
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Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
... other and good services which had 26%, there after was transport which got 10% and the las...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, regarding, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77215189873 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53657747455 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.596226233 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.5 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298799035358 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.410854564759 0.084324248473 487% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.375512476481 0.0667982634062 562% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26694241703 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.344151708156 0.056905535591 605% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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