Please briefly state your scientific and professional interests and objectives, as well as your career goals. Include a description of your past accomplishments that are not evident from the examination of other documents submitted. Report your results, if applicable, on any research in progress. List the memberships in scientific, professional, or honorary societies
Researching is one of the most things I fascinate in my life. In high school period, both Physics and Chemistry are my forte and also my favorite subjects. I participated two times in the Excellent Student Contest in Chemistry in Ho Chi Minh City and was awarded the First prize and Second Prize. Besides, I usually went to Physics Lab and Chemistry Lab in my high school to observe the way my teachers do experiments, which is really amazing to me. In my freshmen time in Ho Chi Minh University of Technology, I joined a small group with my close friend to compete in Chemical Engineering Contest and we were proudly received a Consolation Prize for the idea of manufacturing cheap and eco-friendly pH indicator from red cabbage. After that Contest, I try my best to being admitted to Honors Class, which only adopted high ranking student and was taught in both English and Vietnamese. With the higher requirement, this class boosted my competency and gave me more chance to do research.
Being a researcher in nano technology is my goal in future and I aim to investigate more about Nano particles or the way to apply it in practices. Throughout undergraduate period, almost my time is to do research thesis in Catalysis laboratory about Hollow nano-spheres particle, which is an innovative material employed to delivery drug to treat cancer in specific tissues. This research was done only by me and the only support I have was the advice of my advisor and seniors. I was struggled with this for a long time in virtue of not collecting any successful data and my advisor suggested that I should change into a simpler research. However, eventually, I synthesized it successfully and was given excellent score for my thesis. Basing on this research, I published a scientific paper in ‘The Regional Conference on Chemical Engineering’ last October.
I consider a plethora of scholarships before applying for TIGP, but I think that only TIGP is suitable for my career path since Taiwan is the most livable country and has a great culture and cuisine. Additionally, I was also strongly advised by my lecturer who got her PhD in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. If I was admitted to TIGP, I would continue to research more about innovative materials and nurture my passion in Nano Technology. The applications of nano-materials are really merit for the humankinds encompass improving curability for cancers or enhance the manufacturing process and that is the reason why I pursue it. If possible, I want to be a post-doctoral in Taiwan or another country to become a truly researcher who could fire student’s enthusiasm in developing country to keep their passion about science like me.
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- modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge To what extent is this a positive or a negative development 84
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- Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give yo 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts, which is really amazing to me. In my freshmen time in Ho Chi Minh University...
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Line 1, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally amazing to me. In my freshmen time in Ho Chi Minh University of Technology,...
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Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'honor'.
Suggestion: Honor
...est, I try my best to being admitted to Honors Class, which only adopted high ranking ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... only by me and the only support I have was the advice of my advisor and seniors. I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only TIGP is suitable for my career path since Taiwan is the most livable country...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'merited'.
Suggestion: merited
...plications of nano-materials are really merit for the humankinds encompass improving ...
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Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('truly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('researcher') instead of another adjective.
... in Taiwan or another country to become a truly researcher who could fire student's enthusias...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96717724289 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07340522988 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540481400438 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1854721183 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.111111111 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00793737731688 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00275297791054 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00627296716201 0.0667982634062 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00599919484279 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000638963056461 0.056905535591 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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