Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Environment protection has become the first priority for human race to survive on this planet. Some masses reckon that the government are more responsible for protection of the environment. But in my opinion both are responsible for protection of the environment and I discuss the points in the coming paragraph. To commence with,few clans fathom that only administration are responsible for protection of the environment . Because, the government have a big power to enforce the laws . They cannot control what folks could do in their homes or garden. Then they make a policy about any reason which reasons put a bad effect on environment.however, the government has made many policies related to different sorts of pollution.as well as , the governor receives a higher tax on industrial smoke pollution which factories put bad effects on air pollution. On the other hand, the individual are also responsible for protection of the environment. Because, the government will only implement the laws. But , the populace should follow the rules and regulations then they can protect the environment.for instance,the one man buy refrigerator or air conditioner, cooling gasses being used needs to be considered,as these gasses play a primary role in the greenhouse effect.so that way clans pay attention on environment because it is a moral duty of individual. Nowadays,government are paying more attention for protection of the environment instead of individual.furthermore administration are making laws but individuals are not following them. In conclusion,I believe that if course, it is virtuous for an individual to the environment, although politicians are more responsible for saving the planet because they have the power to enforce rules and regulations on the citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47080291971 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54024274151 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.9665378603 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287826349398 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120804797513 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795236088887 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287826349398 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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