Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Water pollution is one of the major concern among the environmentalist for a long time. People who are aware of the consequences of destroying river and lake, are raising their voices for the sake of the environmental protection in order to sustainable animal and human life. Nonetheless, respective governments of the countries and world leaders are attending environmental summits where major focus is on the reduction of greenhouse emissions, pollution of water in river, lakes and seas is not getting enough priority.
There are various causes have been identified that are responsible for water pollution in major water reservoirs in the earth. Industrial wastes is the most improtant source that scientists blamed for the destruction of water sources. Wastes from the industries, particularly the chemical waste and solid wastes. that are drained to the nearby river and lakes which ultimately run into the sea. This situation is more worse in poor and developing countries where due to the lak of people's awareness and education over the consequences of their acts and water pollution, people and their governement don't bother about it. Though, there are government policy in place, but they never been in implementaion. Environmentalists are also quite suppressed due to autocratic government activities. Because of the symbiotic relationship between governments and businessmans, general people's concern and opinions are largely overlooked.
Another important factor rsponsible for polluting water is the plastic. Since the modern lifestyles and business world are largely dependant on plastic use, they are thrown carelessly elesewhere, particularly in the third world countries where peoples awareness is nearly zero level. Problem with the plastic is that it is not pershable and remain intact for a long period of time which ultimately drained through river and lake water and mixes to sea water. Consequently, both lastics and other pollutants waved throughout the sea water and travels around the world destroying the sea water ecology.
Additionally, poor sewage system and unsanitary toilet system in the poor and many developing countries is one of the major reason for the water pollution. Morever, destruction of large ships or leakage of oil carrier cargo ships in the sea results considerable amount of water pollution.
There are two major effects of water pollution can be discussed which are prominantly affecting both animal and human life. Chemical wates and human bilogical wastes mixing in the water causing it unsafe for animal and human consumption. Drinking this water may results in severe health issues. Moreover, chemicals in the sea water is responsible for the destruction of normal sea water environment which makes the sea world a rather uncomfortable place for the sea creatures.
Plastics causing more serious effect on the living of sea animals. Many recent evidences suggest that both micro and macroplastics are destryoing various sea animals health, causing increased mortality that ultimately may lead to extinction of many species. Microplastics is also making the food chain unsafe for human consumption. Fish are consuming microplastics which are reaching human diet and resulting many chronic diseases like cancers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ly the chemical waste and solid wastes. that are drained to the nearby river and lak...
^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...ely run into the sea. This situation is more worse in poor and developing countries where ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...pollution, people and their governement dont bother about it. Though, there are gove...
^^^^
Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...re government policy in place, but they never been in implementaion. Environmentalists are...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...festyles and business world are largely dependant on plastic use, they are thrown careles...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... pershable and remain intact for a long period of time which ultimately drained through river ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...acroplastics are destryoing various sea animals health, causing increased mortality tha...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2779.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 502.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53585657371 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98251612803 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501992031873 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8651718998 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.16 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.08 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368122478393 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105698624441 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760825752483 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201508893801 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867942786167 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ly the chemical waste and solid wastes. that are drained to the nearby river and lak...
^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...ely run into the sea. This situation is more worse in poor and developing countries where ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...pollution, people and their governement dont bother about it. Though, there are gove...
^^^^
Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...re government policy in place, but they never been in implementaion. Environmentalists are...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...festyles and business world are largely dependant on plastic use, they are thrown careles...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... pershable and remain intact for a long period of time which ultimately drained through river ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...acroplastics are destryoing various sea animals health, causing increased mortality tha...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2779.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 502.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53585657371 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98251612803 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501992031873 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8651718998 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.16 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.08 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368122478393 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105698624441 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760825752483 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201508893801 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867942786167 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.