Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Water pollution is a major concern among environmentalists. This essay discusses some of the main reasons and their impacts on wildlife species and human society.
There are two fundamental factors responsible for contamination in rivers, lakes, or seas. Firstly, there is a huge amount of effluent and litter dumped into the streams and waterways. In particular, untreated sewage, and household waste disposed of by local residents dramatically pollutes the currents and groundwater. For example, plastic waste which takes a hundred years to decompose can cause sewage blockages, follow water flowing into the ocean and it will accumulate on the seabed. Besides, the unprocessed domestic wastes discharged into rivers and seas causes these places to become severely polluted. Another element leading to pollution is chemical substances from fertilizers and pesticides used in agriculture. These toxins infect the underground water flows and then spread over rivers, lakes, and the ocean.
Some fundamental consequences can be recognized as this issue continues. Firstly, water pollution could cause the extinction of wildlife. For example, aquatic species could digest poisonous materials, rubbish in the sea could obscure the vision of fish, hindering their hunting ability. This could result in a gradual decline in the number of aquatic animals. Moreover, the influence on human beings is extremely grave. Inhabitants residing near polluted rivers or lakes have a high risk of contracting fatal diseases such as cancer due to food from water that is poisoned. [Therefore, social health would deteriorate quickly and efforts to discover treatments are highly requested while the expenses on this are enormous.
In conclusion, the main problems stem from wastes, effluent poured into watercourses, and chemical pollutants. As a result, the damage has been colossal. This can lead to detrimental effects including the rapid disappearance of aquatic animals as well as people’s health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66555183946 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94486115904 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645484949833 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.516294883 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1578947368 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237365710841 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643007312858 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615810925438 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13443907108 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429458005552 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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