Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
Polygamy is the custom of having more than one wife and husband at the same time. It is undoubtely the case of polygamy which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to reduce the problem of polygamy.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why is this happening. The first and foremost reason is discrimination between male and female about the education background. In addition, there are always some misunderstandings with each other because of difference in education; that is why they do not make a proper bond. Apart from this, there is no satisfication between them due to the racism. A survey is conducted by Hindustan Times where 6 out of 10 people are those who give divorce due to difference in education system. It is probably solved by the government if they implement strict laws regarding the discrimination.
Moving further, the one of the main reason is the pressure by the family. There is more pressure on the males and females for marriage by the parents. Due to this reason, the males and females do not understand each other properly then, this is become the one of the major cause of divorce in future. An good illustration of this is Maldives where the males and females get divorce with each other because of the pressurize family. This problem is solved by the government where they implement strict laws that people cannot give divorce without any big reasons.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem, given the complexity of its causes. However, one option is that government should make some strict laws where the people cannot do more than one marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, apart from, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91919191919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70031570896 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.996520807 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10601682659 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370398790466 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267970873477 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654836784037 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261929183494 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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