Polygamy has lead ro massibe divorce rate arround the globe.Give possible solutiom and discuss the reasons behind the issue?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...married to more than one wife at a time.In some nations man has create to bad divo...
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... wife at a time.In some nations man has create to bad divorce worth in all the world.H...
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...e to bad divorce worth in all the world.However,I will delve my point of views in my up...
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...d divorce worth in all the world.However,I will delve my point of views in my upvo...
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...rous kinds of pros and cons.First of all,some men are prefer to young and pretty wive...
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...pros and cons.First of all,some men are prefer to young and pretty wives than others b...
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...but man is neglect to his wife when she have an old age.Then women should become wel...
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...ct to his wife when she have an old age.Then women should become well educated so th...
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...can know about the rule and regulations.Moreover,girls should to learn new things regard...
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...elect better life partner for hers life.Also,she should protect from that persons wh...
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...t better life partner for hers life.Also,she should protect from that persons who ar...
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...ence than her nature. Probing further,there few masses has number of affairs with a...
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...ffairs with another females out at home.Due to.this problem their wige and offsprin...
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... many difficulties in their childhood.so,government should to do make strict law on that pe...
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...persons eho are cheat with theri family.That is way the divorce rate can deciline in...
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... divorce rate can deciline in the world.Furthermore, the foremost matter is born to child b...
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...ase boys are want to get second wedlock.But women should to do more and more try fo...
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...or give the birth to kid. To conclude,government should to do allow regin for married ge...
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...ents who make one to more relationships.Government should give punishmenr to them.Undoubtl...
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...should give punishmenr to them.Undoubtly,it would be prove better for the next genr...
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...the next genration and could be helpful an abolish break the marriage connection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02681992337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51292316662 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.713893811 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 20.7667163134 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0284727140763 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191559933193 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203745225806 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0191559933193 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203745225806 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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