Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.Do you agree or disagree?
The hobbies are man-made psychological thing which re-generate the mind, on the other hand, interest is a major concern in the life span.Many people advocate that both the thing have been changing do to the vogue and i totally agree with it.This essay would throw light on the above concerned matter before coming to the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, in the ancient time people were fully involved in their hobbies because during that time the work load was not an issue.Now, human biengs have developed the technology and become addictive.We can say that the new tech- mankind has changed the world and also bieng reflected their interest.As an instance, the survey of vocational university has shown that pupils who were in the favour of the typewriters has decreased dramatically as compare to the computers due to their technological advancement.
Furthermore, the fashion is a raising thing that does not be confined as stable because it reflects from person to person. The youngsters, elders including all generations everybody like to follow it as plagiarism.The social websites are the wide example, people follow their peers and due to pressure they forget their own identity and perspective.they satisfactorily adapt these changes.
In conclusion, personal interest and hobbies can change due to vogue but according to this changing ourselves can be like cutting the wings ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33183856502 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92802792741 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.79365289 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.8 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195167436388 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866255492244 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472138967882 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101276212898 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419478607887 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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