At present time, the population of present countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with a number of older people.
do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?
By analyzing the world population age gives us an outcome that, in almost every country has relatively large number of young people than older people. This fact carries both positive and negative outcomes. However in my point of view having senior citizens are important but it is the young generation who can contribute more thus give more benefits to the society.
Every country requires think tanks to make crucial decision and where elder people shines. They can be extremely effective while making any decision to the country. Especially, the decision which is oriented with the law and that law can last for several years. If any mistake is made in these decisions then the entire country will suffer. For example, particularly in the defense sector, every retired veteran is used long after retirement in order to make crucial decision in the military. Therefore, the, the contribution of elderly people is undeniable.
That said, maybe senior citizens are important for their vast experience but young people are the future of a country. More young people means more worker in the manufacturing industry and more solider in the military. Likewise, young people can be used in different business sectors which helps to drive up the economy. For instance, if we think of manufacturing giant then China comes first and main key to their success is cheap labor. So, it is needless to say the importance of young people hence the advantage of having them.
In conclusion, elderly people can be good at decision-making but it is the young people who have to go ahead and execute the order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es both positive and negative outcomes. However in my point of view having senior citiz...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd that law can last for several years. If any mistake is made in these decisions ...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...al decision in the military. Therefore, the, the contribution of elderly people is u...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...e of a country. More young people means more worker in the manufacturing industry and more ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'solider' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: solider
...orker in the manufacturing industry and more solider in the military. Likewise, young people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01879699248 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61201373463 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1201256781 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114183079233 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389629804716 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057942984447 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762749845104 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597609366985 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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