Nowadays the youth population are relatively larger than the elderly in some countries. this can contribute to the major economical growth of the country.Although there are quite a few advantages it also comes with certain disadvantage like unemployment.
The youth population is always energetic, creative and always has a solution for their problem because of their active and fresh brain. This quality in them can contribute a lot to their work environment. youth population that are higher in developing countries is an asset to the country's labor force. Hence it is always a advantage to have a large number of young adult than the elder.
Every coin has two side, likewise this situation also experiences certain disadvantages like unemployment, less number of experienced workers. Despite the fact that the young adult are smart, the job market can be quite compatetive resulting a rise in unemployment rate. This is mainly because of the age that affects the hierarchy of the work position. For instance if a senior manager of 45 is in-charge it would take him at least 15 years to get retired, which eventually affects the intake of employees.
Although unemployment is problem, it doesn't affect the nation as a whole because there isn't any depression the economic growth of the nation. In my opinion, the larger the youth population the greater is it advantage for the country.
- In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others is obliged to retire until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? 56
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ger than the elderly in some countries. this can contribute to the major economical ...
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... major economical growth of the country.Although there are quite a few advantages it als...
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... major economical growth of the country.Although there are quite a few advantages it als...
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Suggestion: Youth
...ribute a lot to their work environment. youth population that are higher in developin...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...s an asset to the countrys labor force. Hence it is always a advantage to have a larg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, so, at least, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12719298246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95413214624 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6372670543 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192038822322 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677347909262 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523012522358 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106353177088 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414384013533 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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