PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget, A large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures?
Preventing a disease is a method to stay away from the problems so that we do not have to take the help of cure as prevention is better than the cure. Education is very important tool for people all over the world to make balance of life, in which we are stimulates to go ahead and succeed in life as well as provides ability to overcome challenges in life. In my opinion, I agree that a huge amount of fund will spend on health and education and not to treatment.
Firstly, health plays a vital role in sphere of life of people. If we get sick we cannot do our activity daily living normally. However, health prevention is also a method for not acquiring a disease such as free yearly vaccination, encourage the community in daily exercise, monitoring of blood pressure, feeding program, demonstration of breast self-examination and conduct a seminars on disease awareness. If the government allotted a large amount of fund for precautionary measures of health the budget that will use for treatment is not longer needed. As a result, people in the community are free of acquiring a disease it is because from the beginning prevention for health well-established.
Secondly, education is a key to success for every person because this it serve as a weapon throughout of our life. If we are a degree holder we can easily find a job to sustain our daily needs and we can protect our self from discrimination. Being a literate person we always think about a positive ways to become a successful in the future. All the state should spend a large amount of budget for education so that will help people to send in the universities especially in a low-class population who are not afford to pay tuition fees.
In conclusion health and education are definitely essential in our life spending a big amount of fund for health prevention it helps to lower down of people of having a diseases so that the treatment will not need a part of big money to spend for hospitalization and medications because from the beginning we set a preventive measures to control a disease. Having a well state-funded for education will help people to become successful in life.
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- PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget, A large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures? 67
- PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE Do you agree or disagree that out of the country s health budget A large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures 80
- Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94958542445 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472148541114 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1896031227 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263487997586 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989356300269 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818258479948 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177412215075 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594874770894 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.